Thursday, September 1, 2011

Blackberries by Yusef Komunyakaa

I chose to read Blackberries because I love food.  I really didn't know what to expect when reading this poem, and how it was going to relate to work.  The poem starts with the narrator's hand being covered in the berry juices, and he, assuming the narrator is a boy, compares this to the hands of a printer or a thief's, which I though was pretty clever.  The boy is obviously working, by filling his half-gallon bucket but still enjoys eating the berries with his other hand.  While eating he dreamt of better things than just those berries, he thought of all the good food that could be made with them.  While working his dog is with him is watching the birds, and he stares at the frogs hidding from the sun in whatever shade they can find.  Our narrator finds himself on a main road carrying a bucket in each hand full of blackberries, shining in the sun, and ready to be sold.  This poor little boy finds himself in a rich area trying to make some money.  He shouts one dollar over and over, hoping to make just a little money for his family.  When a car finally stops he is reminded of where he is and where he stands in the world, just a poor boy selling berries.  The children in the car smirk at him and this is when he remembers all the hard work he has been doing and also the he has such a different life from those two kids in the car.  I think my favorite line in this whole poem is "Wintertime crawled out of the windows."  This tells you that our narrator has never really experienced air conditioning because the only thing he knows to compare it to is the feeling of winter.  This poem is a very unique look at working that most people wouldn't think about.  The fact that it is about the simple work of a child really shows me that to him his work is just as hard as anyone elses work.  I hope that you take the time to read this poem and enjoy it just as i did.

8 comments:

  1. Just a poor boy selling berries, that just about says it all. He was happy picking the berries and was enjoying himself and all that he was surrounded by, like his dog and the frogs. Yet, at the end of the berry picking he is painfully reminded, he is just a poor boy selling berries. Well said.

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  2. this boy loves eating and picking berries he didn't mind if he got a few little cuts on his hand he get to eat somithgn he enjoys and maybe make some money, but no matter where you are in life you could be just lesion to a cd player or ipod but ones someone comes up beside you and you notice they have a better one then you he can help but get a little down becouse you know that person has more then you but deep inside your you still happy but you cant help but think what if.

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  3. I agree that this poem was very good and a little surprising to say the least. The boy seems to be a very happy child who enjoys working to help his family in anyway he can. He doesn't see it as work he sees it has having fun picking the berries. Although when he tries to sell the berries he has a very difficult time getting rid of them which makes his hard work seem like a waste because he didn't make any money from the berries. When the car finally stop I think the little boys feels differently because he sees children in the back seat who have a much better life than him and he feels sad about it.

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  4. I agree that this is a very well and cleverly written poem about work and status. The little boy was fine working in the sun and heat all day, he was having fun. But when it came time to sell the berries he was reminded of the stains on his hands and realized his status compared to the status of the kids in the cool comfy car.

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  5. I like your statement on him being just a poor boy selling berries. He enjoys everything that he is doing and his surroundings but through out the whole poem he keeps being reminded that he is just a poor boy selling berries.

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  6. i agree with your idea and i really enjoy this poem like you did. this little child is working very hard in a very hot summer. He is very happy to sell the berries but more than that, he may not have any other choice. i think this poem mention us the conflict between different social classes.

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  7. I dont think the kid cares to pick berries till he gets to school and all his friends making fun of him or looks down on him because they know he has to pick berries for his family. He's not as fortunate as the other kids. So until the kids reminded him that he's poor he could have almost forgot and maybe thought it was quality family time?

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